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Friday, 23 October 2015

San Diego Zoo!

WALT:think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.
Plan of my paragraph topics

1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
Mr Goodwin telling us we were going to go to a zoo. But it was virtual so we were disappointed.
3. Body Paragraph 2
About watching a video about animals. How it kind of sucked. Unreal zoo.                
4. Body Paragraph 3
How I think zoos in real life are better
5. Conclusion
What I think about the San Diego Zoo


It’s time to go the zoo. I was so excited until I heard the word virtual, which means we are watching zoo animals on websites. Do you think you can even count that in as a zoo trip?

Task Description:Our task was to write a intro about how boring it is to go to a virtual zoo. We also had to plan our writing before we write. That was so we would stick to one idea.

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