Plan of my paragraph topics
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
Mr Goodwin telling us we were going to go to a zoo. But it was virtual so we were disappointed.
3. Body Paragraph 2
About watching a video about animals. How it kind of sucked. Unreal zoo.
4. Body Paragraph 3
How I think zoos in real life are better
What I think about the San Diego Zoo
It’s time to go the zoo. I was so excited until I heard the word virtual, which means we are watching zoo animals on websites. Do you think you can even count that in as a zoo trip?
Task Description:Our task was to write a intro about how boring it is to go to a virtual zoo. We also had to plan our writing before we write. That was so we would stick to one idea.