San Diego Zoo

WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

It’s time to go the zoo. I was so excited until I heard the word virtual, which means we are watching zoo animals on websites. Do you think you can even count that in as a zoo trip?

Plan

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	Mr Goodwin telling us we were going to go to a zoo. But it was virtual so we were disappointed.
3. Body Paragraph 2	About watching a video about animals. How it kind of sucked. Unreal zoo.
4. Body Paragraph 3	How I think zoos in real life are better
5. Conclusion	What I think about the San Diego Zoo

Task Description:Our task was to write a intro about how boring it is to go to a virtual zoo. We also had to plan our writing before we write. That was so we would stick to one idea.