Friday, 26 February 2016

Goldilocks and the three bears

WALT:Identify the features and structure of narrative writing
Orientation -  Three bears, Father bear, Mother bear and Baby bear. One naughty girl, Goldilocks.
Problem -  The naughty Goldilocks goes into the family's house and eats their food, sits on their chairs and sleeps on their beds.
Solution - Daddy bear gives Goldilocks a big growling and Goldilocks runs away.
Task Description:Our task was to write the features of the story of Goldilocks and the 3 bears.


Kia Orana, My name is Venetia and I am a year 7 student at Pt England School. I am 11 years old turning 12. I have 3 brothers and 1 one on the way, I am the only girl. My favourite food is Butter Chicken and Pizza. When I am not at school I like to spend time with my family and go to restaurants. My Best Friends are, Rosalina, Yvonne, Lani and Revival. My hobbies are playing sport such as Basketball and listening to music. One thing that I am looking forward to is our school FiaFia.

The Spooky Haunted Forest Plan

The spooky haunted forest!
One day there was a  little girl named Chrastia, she was 7 years old with blonde curly hair. Chrastia was a well behaved little girl, she also helped her mother and always looks after her siblings.  One evening she went out to look for mushrooms for her family's dinner. She didn't know where she was going. Somehow she ended up in the darkest part of the forest all alone. She started to hear howling sounds, leaves moving, footsteps and even children talking.         
She doesn't know where she is. She's hearing spooky sounds and she is all alone.
She sprints forwards to the nearest part of light hoping she is safe. She is finally in the light and is not afraid.


What I have gained from 2015

2015 was a great year for me. In 2015 I gained a lot confidence. Gaining confidence has let me express myself and talk in front of large crowds. Last year I learnt how to step up and be a leader. I had my ups and downs last year, girl drama and all. One of my favourite things last year was going to camp at Kawau Island. 

My GOALS for 2016

This year one of my goals is to become a leader. I am now at the age of inspiring younger children and setting my own goals. I am looking forward to been a year 7 because we get a lot of opportunities.` 

My Letter

Walt:Compose a letter to your teacher about yourself

Kia Orana, Talofa Lava, Malo E Lelei and greetings to you all.

This year I am very privileged to be apart of Room 2. I will be spending time with Miss Clark and the rest of the Room 2 students. This letter will provide you with some information about my background.

My name is Venetia. My life started on the 11th of October 2004 at Auckland Hospital. The funny thing is when my life started my dad was parking the car so he missed out on my birth. Fortunately my aunty was there to cut my umbilical cord. Ever since my birth I have been really close to my aunty.

Right now I am a year 7 student. This year I was chosen to be apart Room 2 with Miss Clark and the rest of the year 7&8 students. I started Pt England Primary in 2009. I was 5 years old when I started school here. School here is amazing. When I first started school we had books and pencils, now we have Ipads and netbooks.

In my family I am the only girl which makes me the princess of the family. I have 3 brothers and 1 on the way. I am very excited to be having a another brother. Its pretty weird, I will have a newborn brother and a 21 year old brother as well as my 20 year old brother and my 18 year old brother.

Growing up was kind of hard for me. I was the only girl in my family, I was the youngest of the family too. If I wanted to play, it had by myself or with my cousins. When I was a baby my brothers were my age right now. It was pretty tough.

My cultures are Cook Island and European. My mum is from the Cook Island and my dad is from New Zealand. My mum comes from the island Rarotonga and my dad comes from Ratahi/Otaki. In my culture I am also a bit of Tahitian and Maori. I love my culture dearly and always will.

During my spare time I like to hang out with my friends and family and eat. My family and I like to go out to restaurants. When I'm with my friends on the other hand we like to chat, take selfies and listen to music. Im very grateful that I have a wonderful family and trustworthy friends. One day I would love to live with my friends.

Music has been a big thing in my life. It's like freedom. It takes everything off your mind so you can relax. Unlike others I have more than 1 artist I admire. I am inspired by many artists and their music. One my personal favourites is Beyonce.

I love my parents dearly. They have been through it all, the rough and smooth. They inspire me with their hard work and perseverance. I am very grateful that they are still with me till this day. I love them as they love me.

My letter has now come to an end. I hope you found out a little more about my background. If you have any questions comment below or come to my classroom  (Room 2 Pt England School).

Yours sincerely
Task Description:Our task was to write a letter telling you about our background. We had the choice to post it on our blog or just leave it in google docs and let your teacher read it. I put this on my blog because I want people to know who I am and where I come from.