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Wednesday, 15 February 2017

Explanation Writing-Why people need to drink water?

WALT - Plan for a  piece of explanation writing. 
  - Use the' Title-Introduction-Information-Conclusion (TIIC) structure.



Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
Why People Need to Drink Water
Introduction

Why do people need to drink water? Today I am going to be informing you about why you need to drink water and why it is important.
Information
1st element

Water is one of the main things in the world that is needed. Water feeds everything living thing on the earth. It feeds the living animals, the nature and even us.  Water is important to us because you need it to survive. If we don’t drink enough water we can die.
Information
2nd element

Water can wash out all the bad fluids in your system so it can become healthy again. Water is important for us to drink because it is apart of our immune system and it can help fight of diseases. Drinking water can make your skin and body healthier and even help take your acne away.
Information
3rd element
Water is so important to us. It can make us less cranky, have no headaches, help you lose weight and even help you have no joint pain. Water is very important because it helps your kidneys function properly and helps energize your muscles.
Conclusion
Have you noticed yet? We need water more than anything in this world. It keeps us alive, it keeps our land alive, in fact it keeps the whole world alive. Are you going to drink water more often?
 
                 

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