Wednesday, 22 April 2015


WALT:Write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Have you ever seen your teacher in a video game of superheroes? Well today we had our second immersion assembly of the year, this terms topic is Tinkering, Tools and Toys. Read on for more information.
Marked by Talita. 

The reason I think I was scored a 3 and a 4 is because I am telling the reader where it is and what is happening . Description:To wrote a detailed introduction. 

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