Walt: Follow the structure of a recount to produce a piece of writing.
On Monday we went to the Duffy show.The Duffy show is a show where people come to schools and encourage students and teachers to read. The characters were Sienna, Duffy and The librarian, in fact the liberian actually played more than one character. Sienna is one of the characters, she is the girl who doesn't like reading until.. Duffy and his crew encourage students to read, because reading is cool and if you imagine things you will be in another world. That is the Duffy Show.
First we got ready and lined up in our year 5 and 6 porch. . My class then went to the hall and sat down in our same lines. Duffys crew then came out, they introduced themselves. We played a little game of Simon says and then Duffy ran out. He came with a few books and his guitar. He introduced himself and then we sang the Duffy song.. Once we sang the song the show started.
They started the show of with Sienna not liking school and reading. One day Duffy saw Sienna by herself so he took her to the library . She then said to Duffy “Duffy I hate school and reading” so he then helped her read more. She started to like reading, she read a dinosaur book, she thought she was in dinosaur world. She said to Duffy “ Oh Duffy thanks for letting me use these books “. She started getting high marks in school as well.
Then Sienna red a garden book, she really liked it. She could imagine things, like a lady singing “Tinka tinka tinka tinka tinka lalala” It was so catchy. Duffy asked her “ What do you like Sienna” she said Uhmm Gardening.So from then she started gardening. At the end of the Duffy show they sang a little rap about reading. We then went back to class once it was all over.
And that is what you call a Duffy Show. Duffy is a person who loves to read. He is an encourager. Do you think Duffy is a cool person? It was a hilarious show .
This task was telling me to do a recount about the Duffy show and what happened. I learnt what reading can do to help you and how it can help you succeed in life. It was telling me to use details and vocab.