Thursday, 9 June 2016

iluminate Recount

Walt:Use the T.R.E.E structure to write a recount

We were lucky enough to have iluminate dance crew come to perform for us yesterday. Use the T.R.E.E structure table below to help you plan a recount telling readers about your experience.

Reveal - Who was involved? Where did it happen? When did it happen? Why did it happen? How?
Who:The 3 dancers of iLuminate
Where:In the school hall
When:Last week Tuesday
Why:Because someone thought our school was cool so they gave us a gift
How:A lady who was a visitor came to school and brang her friends to entertain us.
Events - what happened? In the order they happened.
First the classes came into the hall. Then Mrs Nua talked to us
Ending - How did it end? Final thoughts.

Start your writing here:
A few weeks ago Pt England School were given a wonderful performance from a group of dancers. The group who performed for us were iluminate. iluminate are a group of dancers from all over America (USA). Everyone was excited to hear that we were having a performance from this group. The whole school gathered in the hall for the amazing performance. Mrs Nua talked to us about this group. Mrs Nua then introduced a lady, this lady was the one that had got this group to perform for us.

As soon as they had there talk the lights were out. Everyone in the room were excited about that. The lights were out, then all you could see on the stage was a big person, a glowing person. You couldn't see there face or anything because they were wearing all black so they could glow in the dark. Once the first glowing figure was out, two people came in as well. The music then started to play. Once the group finished performing they came out and talked to the school. The selected Kapa Haka children did a performance for the group at the end. The group then learnt the NZ haka. They performed it too.

Once they had finished doing the Haka the school went back to their classes to get ready to head home. However the the Yr 7 & 8s stayed behind to ask the group some questions. Some of the questions were “Who inspired you to dance”, “ Can you do the dab” and more. When we finished asking questions we went back to class to pack up. Our day was amazing!

Task Description:Our task was to write about the group that came to perform for our school. We had to use the TREE structure to write this recount.

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