River talks.

WALT: Write a detailed introduction with a hook and orientation

Polluted, smelly, and dirty thats what our river is. River talks is a demonstration where our community gets together to talk about our dirty river, where there was swimming and playing back in the day . Have you seen what our Omaru river looks like at the moment?

 Marked by  Lani

This introduction is about going to Oamaru creek for the river talks.  We went to the river talks for a demonstration about our disgusting river and what we can do to make it clean. For the past week we have been marking each others rubric for the hook and orientation.