Plan of my paragraph topics
1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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Mr Goodwin telling us we were going to go to a zoo. But it was virtual so we were disappointed.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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About watching a video about animals. How it kind of sucked. Unreal zoo.
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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How I think zoos in real life are better
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the San Diego Zoo
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It’s time to go the zoo. I was so excited until I heard the word virtual, which means we are watching zoo animals on websites. Do you think you can even count that in as a zoo trip?
Task Description:Our task was to write a intro about how boring it is to go to a virtual zoo. We also had to plan our writing before we write. That was so we would stick to one idea.
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